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Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: ■ thank them for the holiday and the photos ■ explain why you didn't write earlier ■ invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: ■ thank them for the holiday and the photos ■ explain why you didn't write earlier ■ invite them to come and stay with you BoAm
Dear Kajal, I hope you are well. I have just received our photographs attached with the E-mail you shared yesterday. It refreshed the memories that we had created last month during my stay at your place in Bali. Last month was like a dream come true for me. It was delightful to finally meet you after 2 years. I am very grateful for your hospitality during my stay. You had planned everything in well advance and made this vacation the most memorable experience for me. Thank you for sharing those lovely pictures that we had clicked on the beach, I am terribly missing that blue sea. I apologize for not writing to you earlier. As I took 2 weeks off from the office, I am swamped with work right now. Many deadlines and targets are to be achieved in a short period of time. By the way, we discussed your visit to India. Please plan your trip in the coming month. You will have to stay at my place; I will come to the airport to pick you up. I have decided on a few cities to stay in too. I will share more details of our staycation over the call on this weekend. I cannot wait to see you again! Lots of Love, Ayushi Gor.
Dear
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Kajal
,

I hope you are well. I have
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just
received our photographs attached with the E-mail you shared yesterday. It refreshed the memories that we had created last month during my
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stay
at your place in Bali.

Last month was like a dream
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come
true for me. It was delightful to
finally
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meet
you after 2 years. I am
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very
grateful for your hospitality during my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
. You had planned everything in well advance and made this vacation the most memorable experience for me. Thank you for sharing those lovely pictures that we had clicked on the beach, I am
terribly
missing that blue sea.

I apologize for not writing to you earlier. As I took 2 weeks off from the office, I
am swamped
with work right
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now
.
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Many
deadlines and targets are to
be achieved
in a short period of time. By the way, we discussed your visit to India.
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Please
plan your trip in the coming month. You will
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have to
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stay
at my place; I will
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come
to the airport to pick you up. I have decided on a few cities to
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stay
in too.

I will share more
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details
of our
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staycation
over the call on this weekend.
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I
cannot wait to
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see
you again!

Lots of
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Love
,

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Ayushi
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Gor
.

IELTS letter Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: ■ thank them for the holiday and the photos ■ explain why you didn't write earlier ■ invite them to come and stay with you

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216 words
6.0
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