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To: [email protected] From: [email protected] Subject: Business Development Manager application

To: appleid@id. apple. com From: anu. bnda@gmail. com Subject: Business Development Manager application 28jJ

Dear Hiring Manager, I heard that Apple was looking to hire a new Business Development Manager and wanted to send you my application. With over 2 years of Business Development experience, I believe I would make a great addition to your team. My career has enabled me to develop and establish skills in such key areas: • Business Planning • Data Collection • Business Analysis I am grateful for the opportunities afforded me in my prior position, and I'm ready to put those skills to use for your company. I am looking forward to new challenges, collaborating with a fresh team of talented professionals. Upon your evaluation of my resume, you will note a period of time unaccounted for. I elected to pursue a short sabbatical. With full disclosure to my employer, I embarked on a personal mission to enhance my professional experience and knowledge base. I would be open to elaborate more if you have further questions! Thank you for your time. It would be a pleasure to speak with you and discuss this opportunity with Apple. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely, Anu Bilegdemberel

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