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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regard to your advertisement. As, I have done masters in punjabi, I will be suitable for your kids to teach my mother tongue. Moreover, I have an experience because I taught in school for two years before moving to Australia. It will be greatly appreciated if I can impart my services to you. I can teach your children and take care of them, simultaneously. I will be glad to come to your home to teach them so you do-not need to take out special time to drop them on specific location. I was eagerly waiting for this sort of job since I moved to Australia for two reasons. It will keep me connected to my mother tongue and I would be able to manage my overhead expenses. Hopeful to heat back from you soon. Pay my best regards to elders and love to kids. Yours sincerely, Anna

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing with regard to your advertisement. As, I have done masters in Possible spelling mistake found.PunjabiPunjab
punjabi
, I will be suitable for your kids to teach my mother tongue. Moreover
, I have an experience This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I taught in school for two years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 moving to Australia.

It will be greatly
 appreciated if I can impart my services to you. I can teach your children and take care of them, simultaneously
. I will be glad to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to your home to teach them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you do-not need to take out special time to drop them on specific location.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was eagerly
 waiting for this sort of job since I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to Australia for two reasons. It will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 me connected to my mother tongue and I would be able to manage my overhead expenses.

Hopeful to heat back from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Pay my best regards to elders and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to kids.

Yours sincerely
,

Anna