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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you yX7EV

Dear Dave, Hope this letter find you in radiant health and best spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you that, Yesterday day i went to the art exhibition which is held near by apartment. I would like to give more information regarding yesterday’s visit. I am glad to be there at art exhibition. In the fact of that, You do aware about my passion towards art and craft. I have seen number of painting and handy craft items in the exhibition. I think you shall also visit this exhibition once. I am pretty sure you would like to go again and again after seeing it once. I am much aware about your art and craft talent, As we both joined art and craft class last summer vacation and had fun together. I am thinking to visit the art and craft exhibition again. For the reason that, yesterday when I went little late and could not able to see all art. Therefore, I was thinking if you would like to join me to visit exhibition. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours Lovely, Dave

Dear Dave,

Hope this letter find you in radiant health and best spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you that, Yesterday day Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 went to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
art
 exhibition which is held
Did you mean "nearby"?nearby
near by
 apartment. I would like to give more information regarding yesterday’s visit.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am glad to be there at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
art
 exhibition. In the fact of that, You do aware about my passion towards You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
art
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtechniqueart
craft
. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 number of painting and handy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtechniqueart
craft
 items in the exhibition. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you shall also
 visit this exhibition once. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am pretty sure you would like to go again and again after seeing it once. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am much aware about your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
art
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtechniqueart
craft
 talent, As we both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
art
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtechniqueart
craft
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 last summer vacation and had fun together.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am thinking to visit the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
art
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtechniqueart
craft
 exhibition again. For the reason that, yesterday when I went This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 late and could not able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
art
. Therefore
, I was thinking if you would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 me to visit exhibition.

Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours Lovely, Dave

IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

184 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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