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You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party 7aP7A
Dear Brij, Hope this letter find you in radiant health and best spirit. I am writing this letter to help me out with Indian curry recipe. Last year when I came at your Diwali celebration your mom made delicious Indian curry. This year I am planing to throw Diwali party at my place and thinking to make this curry for my guest as a special dish. It would be helpful for me if you could share this recipe with me. The reason for that I never ever tried to make this dish in my life. Usually, My parents are with me in this occasion Therefore, I do not need to worry about anything. Due to, My parents are at my aunt’s place it is hard for me to do by myself without any recipe. There are some ingredient which I am aware of still I am bad at portioning. Is possible for you to tell your mother and send me detailed recipe of this curry as there are 20-25 people are going to be part of that celebration. I would like to invite you and your family to come and be a light of celebration. As my parents are not going to be there it would be great if you people are going to be part of this celebration. See you on Monday at 8: 00 PM at my place for Diwali celebration. Yours Lovely, Dave
Dear
Brij
, Hope this letter find you in radiant health and best spirit. I am writing this letter to
help
me out with Indian
curry
recipe
. Last year when I came at your Diwali celebration your mom made delicious Indian
curry
. This year I am planing to throw Diwali party at my place and thinking to
make
this
curry
for my guest as a special dish.

It would be helpful for me if you could share this
recipe
with me. The reason for that I never ever tried to
make
this dish in my life.
Usually
, My parents are with me in this occasion
Therefore
, I do not need to worry about anything. Due to, My parents are at my aunt’s place it is
hard
for me to do by myself without any
recipe
. There are
some
ingredient
which I am aware of
still
I am
bad
at portioning. Is possible for you to
tell
your mother and
send
me detailed
recipe
of this
curry
as there are 20-25
people
are going to be part of that celebration.

I would like to invite you and your family to
come
and be a light of celebration. As my parents are not going to be there it would be great if you
people
are going to be part of this celebration.
See
you on Monday at 8: 00 PM at my place for Diwali celebration.

Yours Lovely, Dave
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IELTS letter You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
235 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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