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You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference.

You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. NrYAN
Dear Ankit I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter because we cannot get a chance to talk after the work last monday. I need your favor, i have held the conference in the upcoming week. it will organized in the niagar park on the 14th may morning 10 am. The conference about postive and negative effects of social sites. I would like you join this conference as a speaker. which panelist we confirmed for the presentation they could not come because of covid-19 instructions. so, i beleive you are expert for this because you have more experience of application as well as you do not need practice to perform. if you accept it i will arrange pickup and drop facility. Apart from it, the end of conference i will arreanged the dinner at 9'o clock. i will ansist you. I look forward to heaing back from you. your best regards Gurpreet
Dear Ankit

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter
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because
we cannot
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get
a chance to talk after the work last
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monday
. I need your favor,
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i
have held the
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conference
in the upcoming week.
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it
will
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organized
in the
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niagar
park on the 14th may morning 10 am. The
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conference
about
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postive
and
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negative
effects of social sites. I would like you
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join
this
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conference
as a speaker.

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which
panelist we confirmed for the presentation they could not
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come
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because
of
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covid-19
instructions.
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so
, i
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beleive
you are expert for this
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because
you have more experience of application
as well
as you do not need
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practice to perform
.

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if
you accept it
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i
will arrange pickup and drop facility. Apart from it, the
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end
of
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conference
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i
will
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arreanged
the dinner at 9'o clock.
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i
will
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ansist
you.

I look forward to
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heaing
back from you.

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your
best regards

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Gurpreet
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IELTS letter You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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