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You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference.

You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. NrYAN
Dear Ankit I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter because we cannot get a chance to talk after the work last monday. I need your favor, i have held the conference in the upcoming week. it will organized in the niagar park on the 14th may morning 10 am. The conference about postive and negative effects of social sites. I would like you join this conference as a speaker. which panelist we confirmed for the presentation they could not come because of covid-19 instructions. so, i beleive you are expert for this because you have more experience of application as well as you do not need practice to perform. if you accept it i will arrange pickup and drop facility. Apart from it, the end of conference i will arreanged the dinner at 9'o clock. i will ansist you. I look forward to heaing back from you. your best regards Gurpreet
Dear Ankit

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter
because
we cannot
get
a chance to talk after the work last
monday
. I need your favor,
i
have held the
conference
in the upcoming week.
it
will
organized
in the
niagar
park on the 14th may morning 10 am. The
conference
about
postive
and
negative
effects of social sites. I would like you
join
this
conference
as a speaker.

which
panelist we confirmed for the presentation they could not
come
because
of
covid-19
instructions.
so
, i
beleive
you are expert for this
because
you have more experience of application
as well
as you do not need
practice to perform
.

if
you accept it
i
will arrange pickup and drop facility. Apart from it, the
end
of
conference
i
will
arreanged
the dinner at 9'o clock.
i
will
ansist
you.

I look forward to
heaing
back from you.

your
best regards

Gurpreet
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IELTS letter You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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