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You Have A Problem With Your Neighbour

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Dear Mr. Patel, I’m writing this letter to complain about late-night noises coming from your house. I am living next to your townhouse that is no. 121. I am facing this problem for the past two months. Let me come to the point, the only thing I hear from your house is a loud noise, whether it is TV or party loudspeaker. I do not want to interfere with your personal life, but it is getting me on my nerve. My younger brother has a board exam in the coming March, and it is prime time for his studies, and when he tries to study at night, a loud noise from your residence disturbs him a lot. I hope you would understand the problem and take immediate action on this or else I have to complain about this to our society chairman. Please do not take this issue as a low priority. I don’t want this matter to become a big thing. Yours sincerely, Dhruv
Dear Mr. Patel,

I’m writing this letter to complain about late-night noises coming from your
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house
. I am living
next
to your townhouse
that is
no. 121.
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I
am facing this problem for the past two months.

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Let
me
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come
to the point, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
thing I hear from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
is a loud noise, whether it is TV or party loudspeaker. I do not want to interfere with your personal life,
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but
it is getting me on my nerve. My younger brother has a board exam in the coming March, and it is prime time for his studies, and when he tries to study at night, a loud noise from your residence disturbs him a lot.

I hope you would understand the problem and take immediate action on this or else I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
complain about this to our society chairman.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
do not take this issue as a low priority. I don’t want this matter to become a
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big
thing.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Dhruv

IELTS letter You Have A Problem With Your Neighbour

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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