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Your english friend Alex is coming to your town for the day and wants to meet you.Write an email to Alex

Your english friend Alex is coming to your town for the day and wants to meet you. Write an email to Alex PV3Yp
HelloMy dear friend Alex. How are you? I was glad to receive your email, that you were coming to my city for a trip. I would be quite happy if you agree to stay at my home and with my family. I think that it is a good choice. If you tell me before you reach to my town, i would meet you at the airport. Afterwards, we will come back ro my home and introduce to my family members. There are a plenty of things to do in my country. First of all, we could go for sightseeing to attractive places such as: parks, museums, historical buildings, shopping malls and so on. Moreover, we have a lot of national restaurants so, you can taste every meal that you want. Our foods are very delicious so, i hope you will like them. You do not need to bring too many things only warmer clothes are sufficient. Currently, the weather is sunny however, it can be change to rainy any time. That is why you can bring your jersey and jacket. I am sure you will enjoy there. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes? From Shakhnoza.
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HelloMy
dear friend Alex. How are you? I was glad to receive your email, that you were coming to my city for a trip. I would be quite happy if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to stay at my home and with my family.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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think
that it is a
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good
choice. If you
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tell
me
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before
you reach to my town,
Did you mean "I"?
i
would
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meet
you at the airport. Afterwards, we will
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come
back
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ro
my home and introduce to my family members. There are a
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plenty
of things to do in my country.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, we could go for sightseeing to attractive places such as: parks, museums, historical buildings, shopping malls and
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so
on.
Moreover
, we have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
national restaurants
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so
, you can taste every meal that you want. Our foods are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
delicious
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
hope you will like them. You do not need to bring too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
things
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
warmer clothes are sufficient.
Currently
, the weather is sunny
however
, it can be
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change
to rainy any time.
That is
why you can bring your jersey and jacket. I am sure you will enjoy there. I am looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Best wishes? From
Possible spelling mistake found.
Shakhnoza
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IELTS letter Your english friend Alex is coming to your town for the day and wants to meet you. Write an email to Alex

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  American English
1 paragraphs
200 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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