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Your english friend Alex is coming to your town for the day and wants to meet you.Write an email to Alex

Your english friend Alex is coming to your town for the day and wants to meet you. Write an email to Alex PV3Yp
HelloMy dear friend Alex. How are you? I was glad to receive your email, that you were coming to my city for a trip. I would be quite happy if you agree to stay at my home and with my family. I think that it is a good choice. If you tell me before you reach to my town, i would meet you at the airport. Afterwards, we will come back ro my home and introduce to my family members. There are a plenty of things to do in my country. First of all, we could go for sightseeing to attractive places such as: parks, museums, historical buildings, shopping malls and so on. Moreover, we have a lot of national restaurants so, you can taste every meal that you want. Our foods are very delicious so, i hope you will like them. You do not need to bring too many things only warmer clothes are sufficient. Currently, the weather is sunny however, it can be change to rainy any time. That is why you can bring your jersey and jacket. I am sure you will enjoy there. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes? From Shakhnoza.
HelloMy
dear friend Alex. How are you? I was glad to receive your email, that you were coming to my city for a trip. I would be quite happy if you
agree
to stay at my home and with my family.
I
think
that it is a
good
choice. If you
tell
me
before
you reach to my town,
i
would
meet
you at the airport. Afterwards, we will
come
back
ro
my home and introduce to my family members. There are a
plenty
of things to do in my country.
First of all
, we could go for sightseeing to attractive places such as: parks, museums, historical buildings, shopping malls and
so
on.
Moreover
, we have
a lot of
national restaurants
so
, you can taste every meal that you want. Our foods are
very
delicious
so
,
i
hope you will like them. You do not need to bring too
many
things
only
warmer clothes are sufficient.
Currently
, the weather is sunny
however
, it can be
change
to rainy any time.
That is
why you can bring your jersey and jacket. I am sure you will enjoy there. I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
. Best wishes? From
Shakhnoza
.
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IELTS letter Your english friend Alex is coming to your town for the day and wants to meet you. Write an email to Alex

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
200 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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