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My lovely character from a book

My lovely character from a book JoNjk
Hey there. Today I’m going to talk about my lovely character. As many of you know, I’m fond of reading. The first book I’d read was “Martin Eden” by Jack London. I like Martin Eden because he inspired me a lot, he approved that if you want, you can achieve your goals. If you want something, you can have that. He was poor guy, who became a popular author, he never gave up. At the end of the book he felt that people didn’t value him for himself or for his work but only for his fame.
Hey there.
Today
I’m going to talk about my lovely character. As
many
of you know, I’m fond of reading. The
first
book I’d read was “Martin Eden” by Jack London. I like Martin Eden
because
he inspired me a lot, he approved that if you want, you can achieve your goals. If you want something, you can have that. He was poor guy, who became a popular author, he never gave up. At the
end
of the book he felt that
people
didn’t value him for himself or for his work
but
only
for his fame.
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IELTS letter My lovely character from a book

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
97 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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