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You and your friend Jerry have tickets for a football match at the weekend but now you cannot go

You and your friend Jerry have tickets for a football match at the weekend but now you cannot go RNrKV
Hello, my dear Jerry. How are you? I am fine thanks. I know that we have to go the football match at the weekend. But, i apologize to you, i really wanted to go with you but i cannot this time. The only reason is, i have got a very essential and additional math exam this weekend. I must attend it and i am sure you always understand me. Hope you will not be disappointed too. I advise you to invite your other friends to go the match together that the ticket which we bought for me would not be cancelled. Best wishes!
Hello, my dear Jerry. How are you? I am fine thanks. I know that we
have to
go the football match
at the weekend
.
But
,
i
apologize to you,
i
really
wanted to
go with
you
but
i
cannot this time. The
only
reason is,
i
have
got
a
very
essential and additional math exam this weekend. I
must
attend it and
i
am sure you always understand me. Hope you will not
be disappointed
too. I advise you to invite your other friends to go the match together that the ticket which we
bought
for me would not
be cancelled
. Best wishes!
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IELTS letter You and your friend Jerry have tickets for a football match at the weekend but now you cannot go

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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