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You want to apply for a training course. Write a letter to the manager of your company to describe the course, tell him/her how it is useful to your job and what company does to help you attend the course.

You want to apply for a training course. Write a letter to the manager of your company to describe the course, tell him/her how it is useful to your job and what company does to help you attend the course. gxBND
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing a letter to apply for an English course at a foreign language center. I am highly interested in this course because I realize that it’s really essential for me as well as our company at this moment. The course is organized in the evening on Monday and Friday from 6 pm to 8 pm. It is helpful for me because it helps me significantly upgrade my English skills, especially communication skill. Moreover, when my language skills are improved, I would be good at communicating with my foreign customers. Besides, I hope to be supported a part of tuition fee by the company. In addition, let me leave the office 30 minutes early twice a week. I look forward to receiving your agreement as soon as possible. Please contact me on 123456 if you want to discuss more about this matter. Yours faithfully, Mary
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing a letter to apply for an English course at a foreign language center. I am
highly
interested in this course
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because
I realize that it’s
really
essential for me
as well
as our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
at this moment.

The course
is organized
in the evening on Monday and Friday from 6 pm to 8 pm. It is helpful for me
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because
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
me
significantly
upgrade my English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
,
especially
communication
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skill
.
Moreover
, when my language
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skills
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
, I would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
at communicating with my foreign customers.
Besides
, I hope to
be supported
a part of tuition fee by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
In addition
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
the office 30 minutes early twice a week.

I look forward to receiving your agreement as
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soon
as possible.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
contact me on 123456 if you want to discuss more about this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mary

IELTS letter You want to apply for a training course. Write a letter to the manager of your company to describe the course, tell him/her how it is useful to your job and what company does to help you attend the course.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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