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Tell your friend about seasons in your country. - How many seasons are there? - When does each season start and finish? - How is the weather in each season?

Tell your friend about seasons in your country. - How many seasons are there? - When does each season start and finish? - How is the weather in each season? APRlM
Dear Mary, It has been too long since we have met each other. I am so cheerful to hear that you are doing well. I am writing this letter to tell you about time of year in my area. As you can see, I live in Viet Nam which is the place adjoining Pacific Ocean. There are four seasons in a year such as Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter. Spring lasts from January to March. The weather is warm, humid and has drizzling rains. It is suitable for plants and flowers to grow. Besides, numerous festivals are organized in this season. Summer starts on April and finish on June. The weather is extremely hot with heavy rains and has stormy. In summer, individuals often have vacation on the beach with various activities like surfing, playing volleyball, swimming, diving and so on. Autumn begins from July to September. It is cool and dry. The landscape is really beautiful and romantic when tree’s leaves turn yellow. It is great to enjoy the mid-autumn festival. October, November and December are Winter in my zone. The weather is really cold, the sky is dark and gloomy. People may prefer indoor activities to outdoor activities. I am really into seasons as well as the weather in Viet Nam. How about you? Could you tell me seasons in your area? I am looking forward to receiving your letter. Yours sincerely, Anna.
Dear Mary,

It has been too long since we have met each other. I am
so
cheerful to hear that you are doing well. I am writing this letter to
tell
you about time of year in my area.

As you can
see
, I
live
in
Viet
Nam which is the place adjoining Pacific Ocean.

There are four seasons in a year such as Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter.

Spring lasts from January to March. The
weather
is warm, humid and has drizzling rains. It is suitable for plants and flowers to grow.
Besides
, numerous festivals
are organized
in this season.

Summer
starts
on April and finish on June. The
weather
is
extremely
hot with heavy rains and has stormy. In summer, individuals
often
have vacation on the beach with various activities like surfing, playing volleyball, swimming, diving and
so
on.

Autumn
begins
from July to September. It is cool and dry. The landscape is
really
beautiful
and romantic when tree’s
leaves
turn yellow. It is great to enjoy the mid-autumn festival.

October, November and December are Winter in my zone. The
weather
is
really
cold
, the sky is dark and gloomy.
People
may prefer indoor activities to outdoor activities.

I am
really
into seasons
as well
as the
weather
in
Viet
Nam. How about you? Could you
tell
me seasons in your area? I am looking forward to receiving your letter.

Yours
sincerely
,

Anna.
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IELTS letter Tell your friend about seasons in your country. - How many seasons are there? - When does each season start and finish? - How is the weather in each season?

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  American English
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235 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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