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You are regular customer of local restaurant last time you are there however, you felt that the standard had dropped sightly. Write a letter explaining why you were disappointed and suggesting to improve the situation

You are regular customer of local restaurant last time you are there however, you felt that the standard had dropped sightly. Write a letter explaining why you were disappointed and suggesting to improve the situation BYRA9

Dear madam I am afraid to say I have numbers of complaints about your restaurant's standards had dropped. First of all I have been a loyal client of your restaurant and it was one of my favourite place for eating. Last day I went there with my friend as a usual I had booked place for two people on the contrary when we came here there wasn't any free place and it happened with me for the first time. After a few minutes some people left the restaurant and we sat on their places then we ordered meal that was new on menu. When waiter brought food the plates were dirty so that we did not eat meal. I would like to hear your explanation for the above problems and I want you to talk with your wash dishers and waiter. I expect that this situation will not recur with other clients also it will be good for sustaining restaurant's reputation. I hope you will consider the points I have raised very carefully. Yours faithfully.

Dear madam

I am afraid to say I have numbers of complaints about your restaurant's standards had dropped.

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. Yours faithfully
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IELTS letter You are regular customer of local restaurant last time you are there however, you felt that the standard had dropped sightly. Write a letter explaining why you were disappointed and suggesting to improve the situation

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

175 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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