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You are regular customer of local restaurant last time you are there however, you felt that the standard had dropped sightly. Write a letter explaining why you were disappointed and suggesting to improve the situation

You are regular customer of local restaurant last time you are there however, you felt that the standard had dropped sightly. Write a letter explaining why you were disappointed and suggesting to improve the situation BYRA9
Dear madam I am afraid to say I have numbers of complaints about your restaurant's standards had dropped. First of all I have been a loyal client of your restaurant and it was one of my favourite place for eating. Last day I went there with my friend as a usual I had booked place for two people on the contrary when we came here there wasn't any free place and it happened with me for the first time. After a few minutes some people left the restaurant and we sat on their places then we ordered meal that was new on menu. When waiter brought food the plates were dirty so that we did not eat meal. I would like to hear your explanation for the above problems and I want you to talk with your wash dishers and waiter. I expect that this situation will not recur with other clients also it will be good for sustaining restaurant's reputation. I hope you will consider the points I have raised very carefully. Yours faithfully.
Dear madam

I am afraid to say I have numbers of complaints about your restaurant's standards had dropped.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
I have been a loyal client of your restaurant and it was one of my
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
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place
for eating. Last day I went there with my friend as a usual I had booked
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
for two
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
on the contrary
when we came here there wasn't any free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
and it happened
The verb 'happen' usually requires the preposition "to".
with
me for the
first
time. After a few minutes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
restaurant and
we sat on their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
then we ordered meal that was new on menu. When waiter brought food the plates were dirty
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that we did not eat meal. I would like to hear your explanation for the above problems and I want you to talk with your wash
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dishers
and waiter. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
that this situation will not recur with other clients
also
it will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for sustaining restaurant's reputation.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you will consider the points I have raised
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
carefully
. Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter You are regular customer of local restaurant last time you are there however, you felt that the standard had dropped sightly. Write a letter explaining why you were disappointed and suggesting to improve the situation

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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