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Letter decribing the holiday so far to parebta

Letter decribing the holiday so far to parebta 6l82r

Dear Mom and Dad, How thing is going? I hope you are well. I am feeling comfortable and great in Japan this time too. There were amazing I can’t wait to share you. When I came here I found easy to book an convenient accomodation to relax for starting my trip. The first time I put my foot in the famous Osaka castle I was surprise. It is geogrous and covered by loads of peach blossom tree. On the ground is a huge carpet of petals. I have enjoyed lots of traditional food already and walked on along snow road with local people yesterday. They are friendly and hospital so it makes my trip more exciting. The most interesting part of my trip was visting Edo museum yesterday. I was really impressed by the old life of Tokyo in there from culture, history to archtecture. After trip I explored more knowledge about Japan. I will get back at this weekend. I’ll phone and tell you all about my trip later. Till the, stay safe Love, Lisa.

Dear Mom and Dad,

How thing is going? I hope you are well. I am feeling comfortable and great in Japan this time too. There were amazing I can’t wait to share you.

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 to relax for starting my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
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 time I put my foot in the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
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geogrous
 and covered by loads of peach blossom tree. On the ground is a huge carpet of petals.

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people
 yesterday. They are friendly and hospital This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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visting
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Edo
 museum yesterday. I was really
 impressed by the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 life of Tokyo in there from culture, history to Possible spelling mistake found.architecture
archtecture
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 explored more knowledge about Japan.

I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 back at this weekend. I’ll phone and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you all about my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
 later. Till Did you forget something after 'the'?
the,
 stay safe

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
,

Lisa. 