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I took a trip with a taxi company.The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and I had a lot of problems. I complained to the company but no one has replied to my complaint.

I took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and I had a lot of problems. I complained to the company but no one has replied to my complaint. Or3G3
Dear Sir, I would like to express my dissatisfaction with a taxi company. Two days ago I wrote a letter to your company. However, you have not responded still. Therefore, I am writing to you on this issue. In a previous letter, I had complained about the driver of your company. I thought your company was noteworthy, on the contrary your company is indifferent. I hope you will interest in my comments. Please, read the previous letter, I wrote and change your driver or I keep asking you to organize a few courses so that your driver can be among the best drivers. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Your sincerely, Diana
Dear Sir, I would like to express my dissatisfaction with a taxi
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
. Two days ago I wrote a letter to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
.
However
, you have not responded
still
.
Therefore
, I am writing to you on this issue. In a previous letter, I had complained about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driver
of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
was noteworthy,
on the contrary
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
is indifferent. I hope you will interest in my comments.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
, read the previous letter, I wrote and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driver
or I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
asking you to organize a few courses
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driver
can be among the best
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drivers
. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Diana

IELTS letter I took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and I had a lot of problems. I complained to the company but no one has replied to my complaint.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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