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I took a trip with a taxi company.The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and I had a lot of problems. I complained to the company but no one has replied to my complaint.

I took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and I had a lot of problems. I complained to the company but no one has replied to my complaint. Or3G3
Dear Sir, I would like to express my dissatisfaction with a taxi company. Two days ago I wrote a letter to your company. However, you have not responded still. Therefore, I am writing to you on this issue. In a previous letter, I had complained about the driver of your company. I thought your company was noteworthy, on the contrary your company is indifferent. I hope you will interest in my comments. Please, read the previous letter, I wrote and change your driver or I keep asking you to organize a few courses so that your driver can be among the best drivers. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Your sincerely, Diana
Dear Sir, I would like to express my dissatisfaction with a taxi
company
. Two days ago I wrote a letter to your
company
.
However
, you have not responded
still
.
Therefore
, I am writing to you on this issue. In a previous letter, I had complained about the
driver
of your
company
. I
thought
your
company
was noteworthy,
on the contrary
your
company
is indifferent. I hope you will interest in my comments.
Please
, read the previous letter, I wrote and
change
your
driver
or I
keep
asking you to organize a few courses
so
that your
driver
can be among the best
drivers
. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Your
sincerely
,
Diana
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IELTS letter I took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and I had a lot of problems. I complained to the company but no one has replied to my complaint.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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