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Write a letter to the agency officer and complain about the rent car which has gone wrong. Tell them the problems of the car you have rented From the agency and your requirements

Write a letter to the agency officer and complain about the rent car which has gone wrong. Tell them the problems of the car you have rented From the agency and your requirements NMqjj

Dear sir or madam, I am writing to let you know about the car which I have rented yesterday from your agency, which has gone wrong and due to that I am facing too much problems. Let me explain you the problems in detail and what I was expecting! As I have rented an economy class vehicle from your company for 5 days from 13th August to 18th August and I paid the money cash. However after just 1 day of driving the car I realised that there have been a problem with Tyre, broken engine and an empty fuel tank. While I have been driving 3 km that I understood the tyre was flat and it had to be changed. Secondly when I saw I fuel meter, it was showing tank is half full, whereas I have filled the tank full. As there was a leakage in the tank. Then after driving for a while, I could hear some exotic sound from the engine and consequently it has broken down in the middle of my way which has caused me a lot of inconvenience. Would you kindly transfer me a new car as off I am waiting in Pune for a day. During this time, I would like to exchange the car in your pune branch. I want you to ensure that this is done without any inconvenience. Thank you for your considerationYours faithfullyDivya

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 in your Possible spelling mistake found.PuneJunepunkpuretunepine
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considerationYours
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