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approach a recruiter and explain them why they should hire you

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Dear Rebecca, GoodDay, I am writing you for my interest in joining Binance Team for Middle east region. I am currently working in Riyadh in an Internet Service Provider in Sales as an Account Manager. I currently have 6+ years of experience. I can add value to your team here in Middle East Region. I currently have good connections with Saudi Royal family and other business personals because of my current role. I would like to take this opportunity and work as binance team member which will add value to binance team and will give a career boost to me. Kindly recommend my Resume to the right person to have an interview. Best Regards, Burhan Humayun +966582380062

Dear Rebecca,

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Best Regards,

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