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You visit the sports club, there is a problem with their parking. Tell how regularly you visit the club, the problem and your suggestions.

You visit the sports club, there is a problem with their parking. Tell how regularly you visit the club, the problem and your suggestions. EL5Dq

Dear Sir or Madam, I write regarding the parking you club have problem with. I have been visiting your club for almost three years, and even at the time I started there was some problems with it. That time it used to have no free space to or three times a mounth. But recently the issue dramatically rocketjumped. The number of the visitors has doubled, so every time I arrive to the clup in evening, the parking is completely occupied, so I have to park my car in paid parking yard in couple blocks from your club. There is unbusy territory near the club and as I know it is avaliable for rent. I sure that it would be a great idea for you to rent the territory and organize additional parking there. I believe that such option will attract more customers to the club and make your business more profitable. Kind regards, Alexey Vishnevsky.

Dear Sir or Madam,

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three
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time
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started
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some
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have
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mounth
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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.

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clup
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is
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so
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have to
 park my car in paid parking yard in couple blocks from your club.

There is Possible spelling mistake found.busyuneasyunjustundulyunrulyunfussy
unbusy
 territory near the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 and as I know it is Possible spelling mistake found.available
avaliable
 for rent. I sure that it would Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphbe.be!be?be:be,be;
be


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterA
a
 great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 for you to rent the territory and organize additional parking there. I believe that Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsuch.such!such?such:such,such;
such


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOption
option
 will attract more customers to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 your business more profitable.

Kind regards, Alexey Possible spelling mistake found.
Vishnevsky
. 