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Complaint letter about write a letter to apologise my friend

Complaint letter about write a letter to apologise my friend 1VyWN
Good morning. Mrs. Merry. I would like to apologise to you for not being able to go to the party you invited me to send this letter to I apologise toy you for not being able to go to your party. I have been waiting a long time to have your party. The reason I couldn't go to your party I am sick and I thought I'd get well before your party. I had a sore throat becouse I ate ice cream. I thought I am going to get well before your party but I followed your part online as I could not go to your party but a apologise to you once again. God willing I will definitly recover and go to your party again I look forward to hearing from you for my aplogy. I look forward your reply.
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morning. Mrs. Merry. I would like to
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apologise
to you for not being able to go to the
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party
you invited me to
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send
this letter to I
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apologise
toy you for not being able to go to your
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party
. I have been waiting a long time to have your
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party
. The reason I couldn't go to your
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party
I am sick and I
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thought
I'd
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get
well
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before
your
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party
. I had a sore throat
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becouse
I ate ice cream. I
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thought
I am going to
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get
well
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before
your
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party
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but
I followed your part online as I could not go to your
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party
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but
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
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apologise
to you once again. God willing I will
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definitly
recover and go to your
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party
again I look forward to hearing from you for my
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aplogy
. I look forward your reply.

IELTS letter Complaint letter about write a letter to apologise my friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
141 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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