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Your friend and his/her family are moving to your hometown. Write a letter to him/her to provide information about the town and say - What types of housing are available in your area. - Give information about the schools in your town. - How they can meet and get to know residents living in this area.

Your friend and his/her family are moving to your hometown. Write a letter to him/her to provide information about the town and say - What types of housing are available in your area. - Give information about the schools in your town. - How they can meet and get to know residents living in this area. BYdDw
Dear Sam, I'm so happy that you are planning to shift to Mumbai with your family, and I'm so excited to introduce you to my hometown. Do you remember, I once took you to my grandmother's house when we were in college, and you liked the locality over there? You will be pleased to hear that a construction company has taken a project a few months back and has started a scheme for affordable housing in the same area where you can purchase amazing flats at good rates and a great locality. I know you might be worried about your kid's education once you will move to a new place but lemme tell you that there multiple choices for schooling in the same area. I would suggest you pick the nearest school, where your children will be able to learn foreign languages, enjoy sports activities along with studies. This area of Mumbai is considered one of the most firendliest locality as people over here are well educated and like-minded as us. You will never feel like an outsider as the atmosphere over there is welcoming and cozy. You can visit cafes, pubs and make new friends and get to know your neighbors easily. Hoping to see you and meet you soon. Yours lovingly, Ruksz
Dear Sam, I'm
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so
happy that you are planning to shift to Mumbai with your family, and I'm
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
excited to introduce you to my hometown.

Do you remember, I once took you to my grandmother's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
when we were in college, and you liked the locality over there? You will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to hear that a construction
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
has taken a project a few months back and has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
a scheme for affordable housing in the same area where you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
amazing flats at
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
rates and a great locality.

I know you might
be worried
about your kid's education once you will
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move
to a new place
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but
The word 'lemme' is informal. Consider replacing it.
lemme
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tell
you that there multiple choices for schooling in the same area. I would suggest you pick the nearest school, where your children will be able to learn foreign languages, enjoy sports activities along with studies.

This area of Mumbai
is considered
one of the most
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firendliest
locality as
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people
over here are
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well educated
and like-minded as us. You will never feel like an outsider as the atmosphere over there is welcoming and cozy. You can visit
'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"
cafes
, pubs and
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make
new friends and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to know your neighbors
easily
.

Hoping to
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see
you and
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meet
you
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soon
.

Yours
lovingly
,
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Ruksz
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IELTS letter Your friend and his/her family are moving to your hometown. Write a letter to him/her to provide information about the town and say - What types of housing are available in your area. - Give information about the schools in your town. - How they can meet and get to know residents living in this area.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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