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Write an letter to tour manager and praise the tour guide that you accompanied.

Write an letter to tour manager and praise the tour guide that you accompanied. bbLR6
Dear Mr. John, I am Amrit and writing with regard to appreciate tour guide, which you appoint for us for travelling experience and knowledge. He is very nice and helpful person. Moreover, it is only due to him, we are able to move around in chenai. We enjoyed a lot on vacation tour. We visited plethora of places, such as historical buildings, old musuems, wonderland, monuments, palaces and forts. I was mesmerized by the beauty of old buildings, these were still looking new, owing to renovation done by authorities. David explained all about the history of that places. Without him we couldn't imagine to vist kolkata. Although he belongs to that state, which was more beneficial for us because he has immense information about their traditions and culture, thus he imparted huge amount to us. Furthermore, david did relevant hotel bookings on cheaper prices. He has excellent communication skills, which was helpful for our journey. Now, i request you to appoint him as employer in our company as a way of appreciation, because, he has numerous abilities that one should require for job in our company or give him huge amount of money as a tip. He is well educated and intelligent person would lead our company on the top. I hope to hearing from you soon, thanks in advance. Yours sincerely, Amrit
Dear Mr. John, I am
Amrit
and writing with regard to appreciate tour guide, which you appoint for us for travelling experience and knowledge. He is
very
nice and helpful person.
Moreover
, it is
only
due to him, we are able to
move
around in
chenai
. We enjoyed a lot on vacation tour. We visited plethora of places, such as historical buildings,
old
musuems
, wonderland, monuments, palaces and forts. I
was mesmerized
by the beauty of
old
buildings, these were
still
looking new, owing to renovation done by authorities. David
explained
all about the history of that places. Without him we couldn't imagine to
vist
kolkata
. Although he belongs to that state, which was more beneficial for us
because
he has immense information about their traditions and culture,
thus
he imparted huge amount to us.
Furthermore
,
david
did relevant hotel bookings on cheaper prices. He has excellent communication
skills
, which was helpful for our journey.
Now
,
i
request you to appoint him as employer in our
company
as a way of appreciation,
because
, he has numerous abilities that one should require for job in our
company
or give him huge amount of money as a tip. He is
well educated
and intelligent person would lead our
company
on the top. I hope to hearing from you
soon
, thanks in advance. Yours
sincerely
,
Amrit
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IELTS letter Write an letter to tour manager and praise the tour guide that you accompanied.

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