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Complaint letter to clothes shop

Complaint letter to clothes shop Vl26O
Dear Sir or Madam, I am sorry to inform you that but I feel I have to point out it. the clothes which I purchased from your shop yesterdaymust be delived today at 11 a. m as I said to your salesman I wanted to go to my friend's birthday but with your mistake I could not go there without present I think you can explain the reason of the situation. I am very dissatisfaed with belowed mistake but I am looking forward to get my goods as soon as possible. I do not ussualy complaint but as an old costumer I am sure you will interested on my comments. I would be greatfull if you will fix the mistake of your workers Your faithfully Mr. Smith
Dear Sir or Madam, I am sorry to inform you that
but
I feel I
have to
point out it. the clothes which I
purchased
from your shop
yesterdaymust
be
delived
today
at 11 a. m as I said to your salesman I wanted to go to my friend's birthday
but
with your mistake I could not go there without present I
think
you can
explain
the reason of the situation. I am
very
dissatisfaed
with
belowed
mistake
but
I am looking forward to
get
my
goods
as
soon
as possible. I do not
ussualy
complaint
but
as an
old
costumer I am sure you will
interested
on my comments.
I
would be
greatfull
if you will
fix
the mistake of your workers Your
faithfully
Mr.
Smith
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IELTS letter Complaint letter to clothes shop

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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