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A letter to my friend to express an excuse

A letter to my friend to express an excuse YBKnr

Dear Arun, I'm writing this to say thank you for your invitation. It's so nice of you but unfortunately I won't be able to come due to my busy schedule. Let me tell you my situation in more detail. I have entered in a new job as a software engineer in TCS, Bangalore. As you know it's one of the top listing company. Many of them are seeking a chance to get a job in that company. So like everyone, when I get the chance I choose it and it's my big ambition to get placed in a reputed company. Now I am really enjoying it, as it tough. Could you please let me know another time you will be free? I'm really excited to come there and also seeing your wife and children, I am seeing them for the first time. But I am sorry to tell you that I didn't get any free time this year, because I just entered. I will tell you when I will be free. Pass my regards to your family. Kindly let me know Your friend Neethu

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