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You used a taxi mobile app and was dissatisfied with the driver service. Your dissatisfactions were long taxi wait, dirty and smelly car plus reckless driving.

You used a taxi mobile app and was dissatisfied with the driver service. Your dissatisfactions were long taxi wait, dirty and smelly car plus reckless driving. kjLw8
I am writing this letter is to express my dissatisfaction with the cab service provided by your organization. A few days ago on October 4, I had sent my car for servicing and due to which I decided to use your taxi service as it is well-known for its reliability and cost efficiency. However, I was startled when I got on the cab. Firstly, it was a mini car at the price of a sedan. The interiors were dirty and the seats had unsightly stains on them. In addition, the door lock was not working. Worse still, the driver was not co-operative at all. I had to do some shopping on the way but he became angry every time I asked him to stop the vehicle. I never expected such poor service from a reputed company like yours. I request you to at least provide soft skills training to your drivers. Furthermore, each taxi should have a feedback form that customers can fill in to rate the service. I hope you will take suggestions positively. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Nikhil Prakash Titare
I am writing this letter is to express my dissatisfaction with the cab service provided by your organization.

A few days ago on October 4, I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
my car for servicing and due to which I decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
your taxi service as it is well-known for its reliability and cost efficiency.

However
, I
was startled
when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
on the cab.
Firstly
, it was a mini car at the price of a sedan. The interiors were dirty and the seats had
unsightly
stains on them.
In addition
, the door lock was not working. Worse
still
, the driver was not co-operative at all. I had to do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
shopping on the way
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
he became angry every time I asked him to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
the vehicle. I never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
such poor service from a reputed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
like yours.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
request you to at least provide soft
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
training to your drivers.
Furthermore
, each taxi should have a feedback form that customers can fill in to rate the service.

I hope you will take suggestions
positively
.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nikhil Prakash
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IELTS letter You used a taxi mobile app and was dissatisfied with the driver service. Your dissatisfactions were long taxi wait, dirty and smelly car plus reckless driving.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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