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Letter complain about a dissatsfactory language course

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Dear SIR / MADAM I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the course you organized in August. Being an active member of the group, I did not satisfy with the arrangement. Firstly the family which we lived with were not helpful and friendly. For instance, asking some pessary items, I took rude answers a few times. In addition, the tutor's experience was not sufficient as I expected. Lots of questions I asked were left without answer. Although you advertised your tutors were best, he was not only inexperienced but also unknowladgeble person too. Furthermore, in the plan museum trip was arranged, but it was cancelled without refunding given money. It made upset us. We feel that we should be fully compensated for our great dissatisfactory course. I look forward to your urgent investigating that situation and returning our money, otherwise we will have to take legal action. Yours faithfully Martin Delovega
Dear SIR / MADAM

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the course you organized in August.

Being an active member of the group, I did not satisfy with the arrangement.
Firstly
the family which we
lived
with were not helpful and friendly.
For instance
, asking
some
pessary items, I took rude answers a few times.

In addition
, the tutor's experience was not sufficient as I
expected
. Lots of questions I asked were
left
without answer. Although you advertised your tutors were best, he was not
only
inexperienced
but
also
unknowladgeble
person too.

Furthermore
, in the plan museum trip
was arranged
,
but
it
was cancelled
without refunding
given
money. It made upset us.

We feel that we should be
fully
compensated for our great
dissatisfactory
course. I look forward to your urgent investigating that situation and returning our money,
otherwise
we will
have to
take legal action.

Yours
faithfully
Martin
Delovega
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IELTS letter Letter complain about a dissatsfactory language course

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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