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Percentage of worker and methods of travel, 2009

Percentage of worker and methods of travel, 2009 RWWDY
The provided bar graph illustrates the information about the proportion of employees and the means of transportation in the year 2009. A graph at a first glance reveals that, in the car ownership is higher and almost tiny amount of people prefers underground in 2009 whereas in London most of the populace used car and bicycle is least enjoyable for people. In both London and rest of a UK, car is the most convenient mean of transportation of civilians to travel which is almost 32% and 80% in the year 2009. Beside this, almost equal percentage of British citizen love to walk which also contributes to make them physically fit. In addition to, more than 10% and 5% of English public travel through bus in London and rest of UK. Similarly, in London merely 3% of bicycle is rides by general population which is lowest infrastructure utilized in London; likewise, in UK only 3% of bicycle is used in the period of 2009. On the other hand, exact 2% of train in London and nearly 4% of train in UK watched as a mode of transportation in 2009. However, in 2009 near to 20% of general civilians travel through underground vehicles and zero ratio of people choice underground in 2009 in rest of UK.
The provided bar graph illustrates the information about the proportion of employees and the means of transportation in the year 2009.

A graph at a
first
glance reveals that, in the car ownership is higher and almost tiny amount of
people
prefers underground in 2009 whereas in London most of the populace
used
car and bicycle is least enjoyable for
people
.

In both London and rest of a UK, car is the most convenient mean of transportation of civilians to travel which is almost 32% and 80% in the year 2009. Beside this, almost equal percentage of British citizen
love
to walk which
also
contributes to
make
them
physically
fit.
In addition
to, more than 10% and 5% of English public travel through bus in London and rest of UK.
Similarly
, in London
merely
3% of bicycle is rides by general population which is
lowest
infrastructure utilized in London;
likewise
, in UK
only
3% of bicycle is
used
in the period of 2009.
On the other hand
, exact 2% of train in London and
nearly
4% of train in UK
watched
as a mode of transportation in 2009.
However
, in 2009 near to 20% of general civilians travel through underground vehicles and zero ratio of
people
choice underground in 2009 in rest of UK.
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IELTS letter Percentage of worker and methods of travel, 2009

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214 words
6.5
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