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Complain letter about an dissatsfactory intencive language course

Complain letter about an dissatsfactory intencive language course pbb7y
Dear SIR / MADAM i am writing to express my strong dissatsfaction with the course you organised in August. Being an active member of the group, I did not satsfy with the arrangemant. Firstly the family which we lived with were not helpful and friendly. For instance, asking some nessasery items, I took cude answers a few times. In addition, the tutor's experience was not suffecent as I expected. Lots of questions I asked were left without answer. Although you adertised your tutors were best, he was not only unexpirienced but also unknowladgeble person too. Furthermore, in the plan musium trip was arranged, but it was concelled without refunding given money. It made upset us. We feel that we should be fully compensated for our great dissatsfactory course. I look forward to your urgent inwestigating that situation and returning our money, otherwise we will have to take legal action. Yourse faithfully Martin Delovega
Dear SIR / MADAM

i
am writing to express my strong
dissatsfaction
with the course you
organised
in August.

Being an active member of the group, I did not
satsfy
with the
arrangemant
.
Firstly
the family which we
lived
with were not helpful and friendly.
For instance
, asking
some
nessasery
items, I took
cude
answers a few times.

In addition
, the tutor's experience was not
suffecent
as I
expected
. Lots of questions I asked were
left
without answer. Although you
adertised
your tutors were best, he was not
only
unexpirienced
but
also
unknowladgeble
person too.

Furthermore
, in the plan
musium
trip
was arranged
,
but
it was
concelled
without refunding
given
money. It made upset us.

We feel that we should be
fully
compensated for our great
dissatsfactory
course. I look forward to your urgent
inwestigating
that situation and returning our money,
otherwise
we will
have to
take legal action.

Yourse
faithfully
Martin
Delovega
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IELTS letter Complain letter about an dissatsfactory intencive language course

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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