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YOU HAVE SEEN AN ADVERTISEMENT FOR A COMMUNITY COLLEGE THAT NEEDS TEACHERS FOR NIGHT CLASSES. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter, say why you are writing describe your interest to work as an English teacher explain why you would be a suitable teacher for that community college

Dear sir / madam, Today morning I saw an advertisement for a community college that needs a teacher for night classes. I was jubilant after reading the newspaper. The purpose of writing this letter is to tell you that I have keen interest in being part of your college. Recently I have completed my double graduation in advance English and achieved overall A grade. From my childhood my aim was clear that I have to be a teacher I like to teach students especially English. I also attended plethora of workshops and classes based on English literature and also be a part of six months long diploma which helped me to enhance my teaching skills. Currently I am working in a school where I teach English and maths to students of grade 8. I am working there from last 2 years. In my view I am desire candidates for your community education platform in light of the fact that I am freshly graduate, the timings you provide is perfect for me, so this opportunity will help me to spread my knowledge rather than wasting my precious time in watching Netflix. Attaching a copy of my CV with the letter. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Ramsha Asad Abbas
Dear sir / madam,
Today
morning I
saw
an advertisement for a community college that needs a teacher for night classes. I was jubilant after reading the newspaper.

The purpose of writing this letter is to
tell
you that I have keen interest in being part of your college. Recently I have completed my double graduation in advance English and achieved
overall
A grade. From my childhood my aim was
clear
that I
have to
be a teacher I like to teach students
especially
English. I
also
attended plethora of workshops and classes based on English literature and
also
be a part of six months long diploma which
helped
me to enhance my teaching
skills
.

Currently
I am working in a school where I teach English and maths to students of grade 8. I am working there from last 2 years.

In my view I am desire candidates for your community education platform in light of the fact that I am
freshly
graduate, the timings you provide is perfect for me,
so
this opportunity will
help
me to spread my knowledge
rather
than wasting my precious time in watching Netflix. Attaching a copy of my CV with the letter.

Looking forward to hear from you. Yours
sincerely
, Ramsha Asad Abbas
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IELTS letter YOU HAVE SEEN AN ADVERTISEMENT FOR A COMMUNITY COLLEGE THAT NEEDS TEACHERS FOR NIGHT CLASSES. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter, say why you are writing describe your interest to work as an English teacher explain why you would be a suitable teacher for that community college

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  American English
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209 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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