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You wish to take a holiday in an English speaking country and would like some recommendations on good sightseeing spots. Write a letter to the travel agency. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • Describe your travel plan • Ask them recommendations on good places to visit and stay Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to seek some suggestions from you as I am planning to go on a trip to London. I would like to visit some good sightseeing spots, so I need your help for choosing it. I have been planning to go for a 10 days tour, at the time of Christmas vacation because my children can accompany me as their school is closed. We are planning to leave at 20th of December from Kochi international airport. The flight is connected, so there is a hold on Dubai and from 21st morning we will fly from there to London. We will reach the hotel near the airport at night and can start our visit from 22nd till 28th. On 29th we need to depart from there to Kochi. This is our tour plan. We need to make our holidays memorable and worthy, for that, I need suggestions from you for selecting the places as my wife and children interested to visit lovely tourist destinations. I hope you will definitely help me in doing this as you are familiar with those places Awaiting your positive reply Your's faithfully, John samuel.

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some
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good
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so
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need
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help
 for choosing it.

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I
 have been planning to go for a 10 days tour, at the time of Christmas vacation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my children can accompany me as their school is closed
. We are planning to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 at 20th of December from Possible spelling mistake found.KochKoch iSochi
Kochi
 international airport. The flight is connected
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 there is a hold on Dubai and from 21st morning we will fly
 from there to London. We will reach the hotel near the airport at night and can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 our visit from 22nd till 28th. On 29th we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to depart from there to Possible spelling mistake found.KochKoch iSochi
Kochi
. This is our tour plan.

We You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 our holidays memorable and worthy, for that, I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 suggestions from you for selecting the places as my wife and children interested to visit lovely tourist destinations. I hope you will definitely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in doing this as you are familiar with those places

Awaiting your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 reply

The possessive pronoun “Yours” is spelled without an apostrophe.Yours
Your's
faithfully
,

John Possible spelling mistake found.SamuelShmuelsamesamplesequelManuel
samuel
. 