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You have an upcoming loan instalment to be paid, but you are under deep financial crisis. Write a letter to the manager of the loan processing team. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain why you cannot pay the instalment • Request them to consider your case Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam,

Dear Sir, This letter is to request you for extending the due date of the loan payment as I am in a very high financial crisis now. As you know, I have never made any drop in installment payment till date. But now I am in a very difficult situation as the entire money in my account is taken for an emergency hospital need. So my financial background is worse now. My father undergoes to unexpected heart surgery last week. As I am the only son it was my responsibility to support him financially. The money which I kept for the loan payment was used for paying hospital bills. As that was an urgent situation, there is no enough money in my hand to pay the loan installment now. Kindly extend the due date of the loan payment to three months as my financial situation is really bad. I will arrange the money within this time limit. I hope you can understand the situation and do the needful. yours faithfully, Mohan Roy
Dear Sir,

This letter is to request you for extending the due date of the
loan
payment
as I am in a
very
high financial crisis
now
.

As you know, I have never made any drop in installment
payment
till date.
But
now
I am in a
very
difficult
situation
as the entire
money
in my account
is taken
for an emergency hospital need.
So
my financial background is worse
now
.

My father undergoes to unexpected heart surgery
last week
.
As
I am the
only
son it was my responsibility to support him
financially
. The
money
which I
kept
for the
loan
payment
was
used
for paying hospital bills. As that was an urgent
situation
, there is no
enough
money
in my hand to pay the
loan
installment
now
.

Kindly extend the due date of the
loan
payment
to three months as my financial
situation
is
really
bad
. I will arrange the
money
within this time limit. I hope you can understand the
situation
and
do the needful
.

yours
faithfully
,

Mohan
Roy
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IELTS letter You have an upcoming loan instalment to be paid, but you are under deep financial crisis. Write a letter to the manager of the loan processing team. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain why you cannot pay the instalment • Request them to consider your case Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam,

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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