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You have an upcoming loan instalment to be paid, but you are under deep financial crisis. Write a letter to the manager of the loan processing team. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain why you cannot pay the instalment • Request them to consider your case Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam,

Dear Sir, This letter is to request you for extending the due date of the loan payment as I am in a very high financial crisis now. As you know, I have never made any drop in installment payment till date. But now I am in a very difficult situation as the entire money in my account is taken for an emergency hospital need. So my financial background is worse now. My father undergoes to unexpected heart surgery last week. As I am the only son it was my responsibility to support him financially. The money which I kept for the loan payment was used for paying hospital bills. As that was an urgent situation, there is no enough money in my hand to pay the loan installment now. Kindly extend the due date of the loan payment to three months as my financial situation is really bad. I will arrange the money within this time limit. I hope you can understand the situation and do the needful. yours faithfully, Mohan Roy
Dear Sir,

This letter is to request you for extending the due date of the
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loan
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payment
as I am in a
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very
high financial crisis
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now
.

As you know, I have never made any drop in installment
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payment
till date.
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But
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now
I am in a
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very
difficult
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situation
as the entire
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money
in my account
is taken
for an emergency hospital need.
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So
my financial background is worse
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now
.

My father undergoes to unexpected heart surgery
‘last week’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate’s tense.
last week
.
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As
I am the
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only
son it was my responsibility to support him
financially
. The
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money
which I
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kept
for the
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loan
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payment
was
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used
for paying hospital bills. As that was an urgent
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situation
, there is no
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enough
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money
in my hand to pay the
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loan
installment
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now
.

Kindly extend the due date of the
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loan
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payment
to three months as my financial
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situation
is
really
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bad
. I will arrange the
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money
within this time limit. I hope you can understand the
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situation
and
This expression is chiefly Indian English or dated British English. Consider an alternative that is more suited for an international audience.
do the needful
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
yours
faithfully
,

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Mohan
Roy

IELTS letter You have an upcoming loan instalment to be paid, but you are under deep financial crisis. Write a letter to the manager of the loan processing team. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain why you cannot pay the instalment • Request them to consider your case Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam,

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  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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