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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it. m1Wdn
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to apprise you of the problem I had faced while traveling by your company's plane. My ticket no. is 72345AD. I was boarding a flight from Mumbai to Delhi on 8TH June and I was carrying a black suitcase. When I land Delhi I found that my suitcase was not yet arrived. I contacted the lost and found department and registered missing complaints. The authorities informed me that as soon as they found my suitcase they will inform me. Now, it has been two weeks yet I am unable to receive it. I am requesting you to please direct your staff to track my suitcase as soon as possible because my suitcase contains important documents related to an international seminar that I am going to attend in the first week of August. I would be very grateful for your kind attention to this matter. hoping for prompt action from you. Yours sincerely, Raman.
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to apprise you of the problem I had faced while traveling by your
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. My ticket no. is 72345AD. I was boarding a flight from Mumbai to Delhi on 8TH
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June and
I was carrying a black
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suitcase
. When I land Delhi I found that my
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suitcase
was not
yet
arrived. I contacted the lost and found department and registered missing complaints. The authorities informed me that as
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soon
as they found my
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suitcase
they will inform me.
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Now
, it has been two weeks
yet
I am unable to receive it. I am requesting you to
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please
direct your staff to
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as
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soon
as possible
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because
my
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suitcase
contains
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important
documents related to an international seminar that I am going to attend in the
first
week of August. I would be
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grateful for your kind attention to this matter.
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hoping
for prompt action from you. Yours
sincerely
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Raman
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IELTS letter You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

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  American English
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160 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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