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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work .he she has asked you for advised about living in your city write a letter to your friend in your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. he she has asked you for advised about living in your city write a letter to your friend in your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there 0AnD5
Dear Adrian, It is very exciting to hear that you will be moving in nepal and a big congratulations on your new job. I complete understand that you are moving in my country. Moreover, most of the people so curious to settle their life in good city. However, there are plenty of facilities to improve their life standard, culture and traditions of our society. Similarly, in here there are various places to live in my city with living room, kitchen and gardenand it is bright and spacious. Well there are more local trains and buses which is very easy to go one place to another. Likewise, individuals can choose their suitable mode of transportation. inaddition, most of human being are facing obstacle of car bike but in my state nation plays a vital role for making good standard of transport. I will recommend to you there are enought space to chit chat and meet colleagues in the restaurant where they can get together for a lunch or dinner. Besides, it is the safe and suitable place in my hometown. I look forward to hearing from you soonYours sincerely, Alash sanjel
Dear Adrian, It is
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exciting to hear that you will be moving in
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nepal
and a
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big
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congratulations
on your new job. I complete understand that you are moving in my country.
Moreover
, most of the
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people
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so
curious to settle their life in
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good
city.
However
, there are
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plenty
of facilities to
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improve
their life standard, culture and traditions of our society.
Similarly
, in here there are various places to
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live
in my city with living room, kitchen and
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gardenand
it is bright and spacious. Well there are more local trains and buses which is
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very
easy to go one place to another.
Likewise
, individuals can choose their suitable mode of transportation.
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inaddition
, most of human being are facing obstacle of car bike
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but
in my state nation plays a vital role for making
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good
standard of transport. I will recommend to you there are
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enought
space to
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chit chat
and
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meet
colleagues in the restaurant where they can
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get
together for a lunch or dinner.
Besides
, it is the safe and suitable place in my hometown. I look forward to hearing from you
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soonYours
sincerely
,
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Alash
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sanjel
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. he she has asked you for advised about living in your city write a letter to your friend in your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Letter
  American English
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189 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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