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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He/she has asked you for advice about living in you city.

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He/she has asked you for advice about living in you city. LrBQK
Dear Fifi, How are you? I've received your letter and It's good to know that you are finally decided to move here. Well, It seems that I'll be seeing you always and Im very excited about it. When it come to our place. You don't need to worry that much Because it was almost most the same from your place. Although, it was just a small City, But then it was highly urbanized. well it was known as a hub of education, and ofcourse, when it come to medical facility there were a lot of hospital and even rural health unit in every Baranggays. As well as, if you'd love to have sone fun, malls are scattered everywhere. Our means of transportation were jeepneys all over the City And 24 hours Taxi then if you'd like to travel to some of our town there were also public buses and even vans to rent. In addition to that international and domestic airport is 30mins away from the city. Well, the people here in our place Were hardworking, hospitable, and you can easily get along with. I really assure that will you enjoy your stay here. See you around very soon. One Friend, Jill
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Fifi
, How are you? I've received your letter and It's
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good
to know that you are
finally
decided to
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move
here.
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Well
, It seems that I'll be seeing you always and
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Im
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very
excited about it.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
it
Did you mean "comes"?
come
to our place. You don't need to worry that much
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Because
it was almost most the same from your place. Although, it was
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just
a
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small
City,
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But
then it was
highly
urbanized.
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well
it
was known
as a hub of education, and
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ofcourse
, when it
Did you mean "comes"?
come
to medical facility there were
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a lot of
hospital and even rural health unit in every
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Baranggays
. As
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well
as, if you'd
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love
to
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have sone
fun, malls
are scattered
everywhere. Our means of transportation were
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jeepneys
all over the City And 24 hours Taxi then if you'd like to travel to
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some
of our town there were
also
public buses and even vans to rent.
In addition
to that international and domestic airport is 30mins away from the city.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Well
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
here in our place Were hardworking, hospitable, and you can
easily
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get
along with. I
really
assure that will you enjoy your stay here.
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See
you around
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very
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soon
. One Friend,
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Jill
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He/she has asked you for advice about living in you city.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
201 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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