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Dear Paul, I’m writing to respond your request about finding job for you in my country. I have the good news for you that could be a cause of seeing you again. I’ve found a number of job vacancies that you could find them interesting. Let me explain it in more detail. I’ve collected an opening position advert in the local museum. The main criteria for this career is having a proper knowledge in foreign languages especially English. The job involves enormous opportunities to get promoted and become a supervisor. I believe this is suited for you due to your experience of living abroad. As a result, this is a perfect time to make a change if you really want. Could you let me know if you need further information? I could do a research in order to find out more details about the job description, benefits and responsibilities. Please let me know, Your friend, Reza
Dear Paul,

I’m writing to respond your request about finding
job
for you in my country. I have the
good
news for you that could be a cause of seeing you again.
I
’ve found a number of
job
vacancies that you could find them interesting.

Let
me
explain
it in more detail. I’ve collected an opening position advert in the local museum. The main criteria for this career is having
a proper knowledge
in foreign languages
especially
English. The
job
involves enormous opportunities to
get
promoted and become a supervisor. I believe this
is suited
for you due to your experience of living abroad.
As a result
, this is a perfect time to
make
a
change
if you
really
want.

Could you
let
me know if you need
further
information? I could do
a research
in order to find out more
details
about the
job
description, benefits and responsibilities.

Please
let
me know,

Your friend,

Reza
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IELTS letter Write aletter to this friend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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