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A FRIEND FROM ANOTHER COUNTRY IS MOVING TO YOUR CITY FOR.WORK he/She has asked for.advice about.living in your city. suggest interesting part of the.city to live in describe a publice trasportation and say how your friend can meet new people

A FRIEND FROM ANOTHER COUNTRY IS MOVING TO YOUR CITY FOR. WORK he/She has asked for. advice about. living in your city. suggest interesting part of the. city to live in describe a publice trasportation and say how your friend can meet new people NrVPy
Dear Fifi, How are you? Iv'e received your letter and Im glad to know that you had decided to move here. It means that we will be seeing almost everyday And Im a so excited to think of it. Well, when it come to our place. There is no difference to our weather. And I know for sure you really like to have some fun. there were a number of resorts here if you want to go swimming and restaurants and bars if you'd like to try our different cuisines. And of course, malls were scattered everywhere. In addition our place is one of the highly urbanized city. It is also known as a pub of education and a number of a hospital facilities. Our main transportation were jeepneys and 24hours taxis and if you'd like to travel to other towns there is a public buses and rental vans too. International and domestic airport is 30 to 4O mins to travel from the city center. Well, the people here in Our place were hospitable hardworking and you can easily get along with. You know that our place is known as a sweet city. So be prepared to be known as a sweet person very soon. One Friend, Jill
Dear
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Fifi
, How are you? Iv'e received your letter and
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Im
glad to know that you had decided to
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move
here. It means that we will be seeing almost
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
And
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Im
a
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so
excited to
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think
of it. Well, when it
Did you mean "comes"?
come
to our
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place
. There is no difference to our weather. And I know for sure you
really
like to have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
fun.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
there
were a number of resorts here if you want to go swimming and restaurants and bars if you'd like to try our
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
cuisines. And
of course
, malls
were scattered
everywhere. In
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addition
our
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place
is one of the
highly
urbanized city. It is
also
known as a pub of education and a number of a hospital facilities. Our main transportation were
Possible spelling mistake found.
jeepneys
and 24hours taxis and if you'd like to travel to other towns there is a public buses and rental vans too. International and domestic airport is 30 to 4O
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mins
to travel from the city center. Well, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
here in Our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
were hospitable hardworking and you can
easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
along with. You know that our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
is known
as a sweet city.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
be prepared
to
be known
as a sweet person
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. One Friend,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Jill

IELTS letter A FRIEND FROM ANOTHER COUNTRY IS MOVING TO YOUR CITY FOR. WORK he/She has asked for. advice about. living in your city. suggest interesting part of the. city to live in describe a publice trasportation and say how your friend can meet new people

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