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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. RNkMY
Dear Mr. Taylor, I am Vinay Tiwari, working as part time food and beverage associate at the St. Paul’s hotel. I am also pursuing The MSc. in international hospitality and tourism management full-time course from Sheffield Hallam University. This letter is a request for 15 days of leave from my responsibilities for the completion of my mid-term assignments. I do understand that we have very specific and limited manpower of each job at the hotel, but submission of my assignments is equally significant to me as well. As, after completion of my course I will be provided a placement as a management trainee in this hotel so, I will be associated for a long term with this organisation. I do assure, upon my return from 15 days of leave I will ensure no further leave requests until next term assignment submissions, which will be held mid next year. Also, I do promise to be more flexible in my working hours and you may schedule me in any working hour combination going forward. I will be thankful for your kind consideration of my humble request and hope for a long-term association working together. Warm regards,
Dear Mr. Taylor,

I am
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Vinay
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Tiwari
,
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working
as
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part time
food and beverage associate at the St. Paul’s hotel. I am
also
pursuing The
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MSc.
in international hospitality and tourism management full-time course from Sheffield Hallam University.

This letter is a request for 15 days of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
from my responsibilities for the completion of my mid-term assignments. I do understand that we have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
specific and limited manpower of each job at the hotel,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
submission of my assignments is
equally
significant to me
as well
. As, after completion of my course I will
be provided
a placement as a management trainee in this hotel
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I will
be associated
for a long term with this
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.
organisation
.

I do assure, upon my return from 15 days of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
I will ensure no
further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
requests until
next
term assignment submissions, which will
be held
mid
next
year.
Also
, I do promise to be more flexible in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
hours and you may schedule me in any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
hour combination going forward.

I will be thankful for your kind consideration of my humble request and hope for a long-term association
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
together.

Warm regards,
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IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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