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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost . You have still leard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airlines and explain what happened Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it. You should write at least 150 words.

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still leard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airlines and explain what happened Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it. E8EB
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a frequent flyer of your airlines. The purpose of writing today is to infrom you about my lost baggage and delays in actions from your company. On 3rd Jan, I flew on flight no. AA123 from DIA to PIA as a passenger of your airlines. Upon reaching my destination I reached baggage claim area and waited for my suitcase to arrive. The suitcase I owe was bright yellow in color and was manufactured by famous brand named Americam Tourister. It was nearly impossible to miss that suitcase yet I couldn't get sight of it and an hour of my arrival had passed. Upon enquiry with airport staff I was informed that all the baggages had been placed in the claiming area and there is slim chance of it not being loaded on the flight to my destination. Unfortunately, that suitcase contained many official documents and were immensly important for me. I filed a complaint to the airline office at the airport where I was assured that it will be delivered to my home address with in 2 days. Unfortunately, I havn't heard further about my suitcase and a whole week has passed. I request for your immediate attention in the matter otherwise I will be left with no other ways than to seeking legal actions against your airlines. I thank you in advance for your time and effort in this regard. Yours Faithfully, Pb
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a frequent flyer of your airlines. The purpose of writing
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today
is to

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infrom
you about my lost baggage and delays in actions from your
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company
.

On 3rd Jan, I flew on flight no. AA123 from
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DIA
to
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PIA
as a

passenger of your airlines. Upon reaching my destination I reached baggage claim area and waited for my
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suitcase
to arrive. The
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suitcase
I owe was bright yellow in color and
was manufactured
by
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famous
brand named
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Americam
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Tourister
. It was
nearly
impossible to miss that
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suitcase
yet
I couldn't
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get
sight of it and an hour of my arrival had passed. Upon
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enquiry
with airport staff I
was informed
that all the
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baggages
had
been placed
in the claiming area and there is slim chance of it not
being loaded
on the flight to my destination.

Unfortunately, that
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suitcase
contained
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many
official documents and were
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immensly
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important
for me. I filed a complaint to the airline office at the airport where I
was assured
that it will
be delivered
to my home address with in 2 days. Unfortunately, I
Did you mean "haven't"?
havn't
heard
further
about my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
and a whole week has passed.

I request for your immediate attention in the matter
otherwise
I will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
with no other ways than to seeking legal actions against your airlines. I thank you in advance for your time and effort in this regard.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Pb
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IELTS letter You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still leard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airlines and explain what happened Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
239 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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