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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. kapn
dear Mr. John I'm writing this letter to request sometime of form work. I am currently working on my master thesis and im am struggling with the time line and unfortunately if nothing changes I'm sure i will be unable to meet my dead line. It would be of great help if i could use some of my annual leave allowance and take the next week off, this will greatly help me and, will let me finish my project. with that in mind i will of course still be reachable on my email and, naturally I will still be able to help out at work remotely. also i believe that my master’s degree would be of useful because im meagering in business administration and this would help me a lot at work since it would advance my knowledge in my day to day tasks looking forward to a positive reply. Rawad El hachem
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dear
Mr. John

I'm writing this letter to request sometime of form work. I am
currently
working on my master thesis and
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im
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am
struggling with the time line and unfortunately if nothing
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changes
I'm sure
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i
will be unable to
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meet
my dead line.

It would be of great
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help
if
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i
could
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use
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some
of my annual
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leave
allowance and take the
next
week off, this will
greatly
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help
me and, will
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let
me finish my project.
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with
that in mind
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i
will
of course
still
be reachable on my email and,
naturally
I will
still
be able to
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help
out at work
remotely
.
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also
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i
believe that my master’s degree would be of useful
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because
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im
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meagering
in business administration and this would
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help
me a lot at work since it would advance my knowledge in my
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day to day
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tasks


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looking
forward to a
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positive
reply.

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Rawad
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El
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hachem

IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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