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Letter for Australian position

Letter for Australian position DeW6

Dear Sir or Madam, This is regarding your advertisement in the Australian Daily magazine about an open position for a child care taker. I am a recent university graduate currently on a break to explore and experience new cultures. Meeting new people and learning new skills is what I enjoy the most which is why I wish to come to Australia. I have experience in taking care of young children from ages four to ten. Being the eldest in a joint family has taught me skills in taking care of younger siblings. Furthermore, I like being around kids and often engage them in play sports and fun challenges that keeps them happy. It is due to this reason I feel confident in taking care of your six year old kid. Given an opportunity to come to Australia, I will be able to meet, engage and make friends with people across the world. With exotic cuisine and breathtaking views, I am excited to check out the beaches around the Australian coast. It will be great to hear your response on my application. I will keep in touch. Yours sincerely, Dhruv

Dear Sir or Madam,

This is regarding your advertisement in the Australian Daily magazine about an open position for a child You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresponsibility
care
 taker. I am a recent university graduate currently
 on a break to explore and experience new cultures. Meeting new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and learning new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 is what I enjoy the most which is why I wish to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to Australia.

I have experience in taking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresponsibility
care
 of young children from ages four to ten. Being the eldest in a joint family has taught me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 in taking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresponsibility
care
 of younger siblings. Furthermore
, I like being around kids and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 engage them in play sports and fun challenges that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 them happy. It is due to this reason I feel confident in taking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresponsibility
care
 of your six year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 kid.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
 an opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to Australia, I will be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
, engage and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 friends with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 across the world. With exotic cuisine and breathtaking views, I am excited
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 out the beaches around the Australian coast.

It will be great to hear your response on my application. I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in touch.

Yours sincerely
,

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