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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. BnXm
Dear Mr. Joseph, Myself Maria, I am your new neighbour, living next to your house. And, I am writing this letter to welcome you to come for a house-warming party which is going to be held at my home. There will be a musical program be conducted there, not sure whether it will be a disturb for you. As I am a new person to this area, I do not know whether my new lovely neighbours would agree about having parties to be held. However, it won't make much noise still I am concerned. Along with musical programs, I am planning to have a DJ party too. So everyone can dance together, it will be more fun and exciting. Let me know your suggestions and consider this letter as an invitation as well. Your's Lovingly, New neighbor Maria
Dear Mr. Joseph,

Myself Maria, I am your new
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neighbour
, living
next
to your
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house
. And, I am writing this letter to welcome you to
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come
for a
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house
-warming party which is going to
be held
at my home. There will be a musical program
be conducted
there, not sure whether it will be
After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'disturb' is correct. If 'disturb' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a disturb
for you. As I am a new person to this area, I do not know whether my new lovely
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neighbours
would
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agree
about having parties to
be held
.
However
, it won't
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make
much noise
still
I
am concerned
. Along with musical programs, I am planning to have a DJ party too.
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So
everyone can dance together, it will be more fun and exciting.

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Let
me know your suggestions and consider this letter as an invitation
as well
.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?
Your's
Lovingly
,

New neighbor

Maria
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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
137 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.