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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. MaJe
Dear John, My name is Amita Dholakia, to whom you looked after an accident. I hope you are well. I am writing this letter to say thank you for saving me after an accident. I am the only person working in my house. My family members have appreciated your effort to help the unknown person on the road. In the current time, people got a busy schedule. No one thinks to waste time on others. You are a good human being as well as a good caretaker. In modern time few people help an unfamiliar person. I request you to visit my home with your family. Please Give me a chance to serve you at my home. My family has appreciated your humanity. My family wants to meet you. If you suggest any weekdays when you and your family members can come to my home for dinner. Once you tell me prior a day you can come, so it will be easy for me to make necessary arrangements for you. Please accept my invitation. I will wait for your reply. Yours sincerely, Amita Dholakia
Dear John,

My name is
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Amita
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Dholakia
, to whom you looked after an accident. I hope you are well. I am writing this letter to say thank you for saving me after an accident.

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am the
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only
person working in my
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house
. My
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family
members have appreciated your effort to
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help
the unknown person on the road. In the
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current
time,
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people
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got
a busy schedule. No one
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thinks
to waste time on others. You are a
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good
human being
as well
as a
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good
caretaker. In modern
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time


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few
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people
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help
an unfamiliar person.

I request you to visit my home with your
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family
.
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Please
Give me a chance to serve you at my home. My
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family
has appreciated your humanity. My
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family
wants to
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meet
you. If you suggest any weekdays when you and your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
members can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to my home for dinner. Once you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me prior a day you can
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come
,
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so
it will be easy for me to
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make
necessary arrangements for you.

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Please
accept my invitation. I will wait for your reply.

Yours
sincerely
,
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Amita
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Dholakia
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.