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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. w2oN
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing in regards to request you time off for ten days to complete and obtain certification for my online professional engineering qualification. There is an examination to get certified for this qualification, thus I am requesting you to give me a leave for ten days, so that I can focus on my preparation and achieve good score in it. Through my knowledge and experience, I have always tried to perform well by fulfilling the responsibilities given to me. In addition, if you approve my time off, I assure you to work for extra hours when and where required by the company. Moreover, my professional engineering qualification will help me to achieve designation as a professional engineer (acronym as P. Eng) and our company will get advantages of possessing one more P. Eng professional in the company. I would highly appreciate if you can approve my leave. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithully, Mira Kapoor
Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
request you time off for ten days to complete and obtain certification for my online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
professional
engineering qualification.

There is an examination to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
certified for this qualification,
thus
I am requesting you to give me a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
for ten days,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can focus on my preparation and achieve
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
score in it.

Through my knowledge and experience, I have always tried to perform well by fulfilling the responsibilities
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to me.
In addition
, if you approve my time off, I assure you to work for extra hours when and where required by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Moreover
, my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
professional
engineering qualification will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to achieve designation as a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
professional
engineer (acronym as P. Eng) and our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
advantages of possessing one more P. Eng
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
professional
in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

I would
highly
appreciate if you can approve my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
. I hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
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faithully
,

Mira
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Kapoor
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IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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167 words
6.0
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