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Letter for working at our head office

Letter for working at our head office lkw1

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my interest in working at our Toronto office which is the base of our operations. I came across the new position of the Analyst role that was opened up recently at the head office, This was also posted across the internal portal. This can prove a good opportunity for me, also working closely with the senior management team members would boost up my knowledge at the functional level. In my absence in current team, work can be handled by our team member Joe. He is quiet capable and dedicated when it comes to working with our current software and is a quick learner as well. Also, we have been working together on couple of tasks so the transition would be pretty smooth. I would really appereciate if you can help me in arranging the travel and transfer to our head office and your recommendation will make it more impactful. Yours Faithfully. Nitin Waradkar

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 at our Toronto office which is the base of our operations.

I came across the new position of the Analyst role that was opened
 up recently at the head office, This was also
 posted across the internal portal.

This can prove a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 opportunity for me, also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
closely
 with the senior management team members would boost up my knowledge at the functional level.

In my absence in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 team, work can be handled
 by our team member Joe. He is Did you mean "quite"? 'quiet' means 'silent', 'quite' mean 'very' or 'to a moderate extent'quite
quiet
 capable and dedicated when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 with our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 software and is a quick learner as well
. Also
, we have been You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 together on couple of tasks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the transition would be pretty smooth.

I would really
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appereciate
 if you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in arranging the travel and transfer to our head office and your recommendation will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it more impactful.

Yours Faithfully
.

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