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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take klLM
Dear Sir, I am writing this to put a complaint about my recent visit, on the occasion of my birthday, with my family to your esteemed restaurant which is related to the meal served which in turn leads to huge disappointment. Let me explain the situation in more detail. The last time when we visited the place, we ordered a three-course meal, starting from the snacks in starters to a dessert at the end, with the hope of having a wonderful experience as we have heard some extraordinary reviews from some of our relatives. However, our experience was extremely horrible as the dishes served were not up to the mark, and even found some hair follicles and pieces of glass in some of the dishes. I even complained about the quality of the food to the waiters but they even argued with me instead of apologizing for the incident. So, I would like you to initiate a refund as compensation for the disgusting experience we suffered that night. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, ABC
Dear Sir,

I am writing this to put a complaint about my recent visit, on the occasion of my birthday, with my family to your esteemed restaurant which
is related
to the meal served which in turn leads to huge disappointment.

Let
me
explain
the situation in more detail. The last time when we visited the place, we ordered a three-course meal, starting from the snacks in starters to a dessert at the
end
, with the hope of having a wonderful experience as we have heard
some
extraordinary reviews from
some
of our relatives.
However
, our experience was
extremely
horrible as the dishes served were not up to the mark, and even found
some
hair follicles and pieces of glass in
some of the
dishes. I even complained about the quality of the food to the waiters
but
they even argued with me
instead
of apologizing for the incident.

So
, I would like you to initiate a refund as compensation for the disgusting experience we suffered that night.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

ABC
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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