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Write an apology letter to your manager for frequently coming late to the office.

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Dear sir, I am writing this letter to apologize for showing up late to work these days. I know that making this excuse very often is not advisable, my situation insists me to do so. As you know that I am living at the outskirts of the city, it is always difficult for me to commute to the office. I hardly get a bus since there are frequent buses from my place to the city. In addition to this, I am a single parent who has the responsibility of preparing my children to school that delays my departure time. Therefore, I would be able to manage if I am provided with the company's cab facility. Otherwise, I would request you to postpone my arrival time from 9. 00 am to 10. 00 am, as I am convenient with working late in the evening. I would be grateful if my concerns are considered. I look forward to hearing a positive response from you soon. Yours sincerely Sara.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to apologize for showing up late to work these days. I know that making this excuse
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is not advisable, my situation insists me to do
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As you know that I am living at the outskirts of the city, it is always difficult for me to commute to the office. I hardly
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a bus since there are frequent buses from my place to the city.
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to this, I am a single parent who has the responsibility of preparing my children to school that delays my departure time.

Therefore
, I would be able to manage if I
am provided
with the
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company
's cab facility.
Otherwise
, I would request you to postpone my arrival time from 9. 00 am to 10. 00 am, as I am convenient with working late in the evening. I would be grateful if my concerns
are considered
.

I look forward to hearing a
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positive
response from you
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.

Yours
sincerely


Sara.
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IELTS letter Write an apology letter to your manager for frequently coming late to the office.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
166 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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