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You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear… NjLm

Dear john, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to let you know that i am enrolled in a cookery classes and I recommend that you could also participate in this because this could be great fun if we are together. The cooking classes will be started from 18th of march and last upto three or four weeks. The location for this is in the conference hall at our university which is now changed for cooking classes. i want you to join this classes to gain knowledge about various type of dishes, how to prepare them and what are ingredients which we need. As i know that you always wanted to go abroad for their higher education for that knowledge of cooking help you there. To discuss further information about the classes, let’s plan to meet on the weekend. Moreover, I am inviting you to come to my place for dinners. Its been an ages when had a nice time together. Don’t forget to come. I will be waiting for you. With regards, Smith

Dear john,

Hope you are doing well.

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. I will be waiting for you.

With regards,

Smith

IELTS letter You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

174 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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