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You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear… NjLm
Dear john, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to let you know that i am enrolled in a cookery classes and I recommend that you could also participate in this because this could be great fun if we are together. The cooking classes will be started from 18th of march and last upto three or four weeks. The location for this is in the conference hall at our university which is now changed for cooking classes. i want you to join this classes to gain knowledge about various type of dishes, how to prepare them and what are ingredients which we need. As i know that you always wanted to go abroad for their higher education for that knowledge of cooking help you there. To discuss further information about the classes, let’s plan to meet on the weekend. Moreover, I am inviting you to come to my place for dinners. Its been an ages when had a nice time together. Don’t forget to come. I will be waiting for you. With regards, Smith
Dear john,

Hope you are doing well.

I am writing to
let
you know that
i
am enrolled
in a cookery
classes
and I recommend that you could
also
participate in this
because
this could be great fun if we are together.

The cooking
classes
will be
started
from 18th of march and last
upto
three or four weeks. The location for this is in the conference hall at our university which is
now
changed
for cooking
classes
.
i
want you to
join
this
classes
to gain knowledge about various type of dishes, how to prepare them and what are ingredients which we need. As
i
know that you always wanted to go abroad for their higher education for that knowledge of cooking
help
you there.

To discuss
further
information about the
classes
,
let
’s plan to
meet
on the weekend.
Moreover
, I am inviting you to
come
to my place for dinners.
Its
been
an ages
when had a nice time together.

Don’t forget to
come
. I will be waiting for you.

With regards,

Smith
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IELTS letter You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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