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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and • Give your reason for writing • Tell about your education • Describe your work experience and

You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and • Give your reason for writing • Tell about your education • Describe your work experience and AVlX
Dear Mr. Walker, I am writing to apply for the post Quality Assurance Manager that I have seen advertised on the notice board last week March 3, 2021. I believed I am qualified and fit for this position. At the moment, I am pursuing my studies taking up business administration on this university and this is my last term. Prior to this study, I also had my bachelor's degree in Industrial Engineering at California Institute of Technology wherein I finished with honors and was offered a position at the same university as a Quality Assurance Officer. During this time, I was assigned and was responsible in taking care of the daily operations of the drone manufacturing. I had to make sure that the errors are at below 2 percent of the daily output. It was at this work experience that I was able to strengthen my management and leadership skills. I am available for an interview after 3: 00 pm on weekdays and anytime during the weekends. You may contact me on my registered mobile number and email in school. Thank you in reviewing my application. I am looking for a favorable response from you and looking forward for an interview. Best regards, Evangel Arcega
Dear Mr. Walker,

I am writing to apply for the post Quality Assurance Manager that I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
advertised on the notice board last week March 3, 2021. I believed I
am qualified
and fit for this position.

At the moment, I am pursuing my studies taking up business administration on this university and this is my last term. Prior to this study, I
also
had my bachelor's degree in Industrial Engineering at California Institute of Technology wherein I finished with honors and
was offered
a position at the same university as a Quality Assurance Officer.

During this time, I
was assigned
and was responsible in taking care of the daily operations of the drone manufacturing. I had to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that the errors are at below 2 percent of the daily output. It was at this work experience that I was able to strengthen my management and leadership
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

I am available for an interview after 3: 00 pm on weekdays and anytime during the weekends. You may contact me on my registered mobile number and email in school.

Thank you in reviewing my application. I am looking for a favorable response from you and looking forward for an interview.

Best regards,

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Evangel
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Arcega

IELTS letter You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and • Give your reason for writing • Tell about your education • Describe your work experience and

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