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Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

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Dear Sarah, I am writing this letter with regard to your request about the latest news story in my country. The black needle box is the latest news, and scientist claim that it possess some kind mysterious energy from outter space. Its morophological apperance is black and has red and green lights glowing on the needle. This artifact has gained lot intrest from people all around the world, and scientist are travelling here to have a look and study about this material. Some people claim that it was created by the myans which can harvest energy from the cosmic rays in the universe and provide the world with green energy. I remeber my grandmother telling me about a story of the green and red light held by some tribal to give light for the entire village. I wish you could travel here and we could go to the site and have visit. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Abram

Dear Sarah,

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 am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely
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Abram

IELTS letter Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

162 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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