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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer DWLW

Dear sir, Kindly i would like to give my appreciation about how your hotel is very clean and how it's inspire me that everything is well organized, but unfortunately there's a problem I would like to share it with you. I have my final exams next month, and you know that have another student sharing the room with me, He's always making it difficult for me to work on my studying, as he woke up every day late and keeps awake till the early morning, although he doesn't disturb me by loud voices, but he keep doing movement for eating or studying, and that's really making it not possible to me for getting an enough amount of sleeping hours before waking up in the early morning to attend to my college on time. I know that you and your accommodation have a well reputation, and that's why I'm asking you for getting a single room but with a little discount if it's possible. BR, Amr

Dear sir,

Kindly Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would like to give my appreciation about how your hotel is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 clean and how it's inspire me that everything is well organized, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 unfortunately there's a problem I would like to share it with you.

I have my final exams next
 month, and you know that have another student sharing the room with me, He's always making it difficult for me to work on my studying, as he woke up every day late and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 awake till the early morning, although he doesn't disturb me by loud voices, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "keeps", "kept".keepskept
keep
 doing movement for eating or studying, and that's really
 making it not possible to me for getting an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 amount of sleeping hours This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 waking up in the early morning to attend to my college on time.

I know that you and your accommodation have a well reputation, and that's why I'm asking you for getting a single room This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 with a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 discount if it's possible.

BR,

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