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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems gpw7
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Writing to let you know that I felt unhappy with the food at your restaurant. Last Sunday I visited to your place with my family for dinner. It was special eve since it was my mother's birthday. As it was an important occasion, we decided to have supper at your hotel on prior booking. I was highly disappointed with the meals. Let me explain, ambience at the restaurant was fine yet the meals were served in an uncleaned plate. This action has been reported to server on spot! In addition, the dishes we ordered had a pungent smell which was unbearable. It looked like sea food were not cleaned properly. I wanted to bring the above problems to your notice so that you can co-ordinate with the other staff. I request you to work on the food cleanliness which is key factor to restaurant. Would you please let the customers know about the availability of dishes on prior while booking? Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Nancy
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Writing to
let
you know that I felt unhappy with the food at your restaurant. Last Sunday I visited to your place with my family for dinner. It
was special
eve since it was my mother's birthday. As it was an
important
occasion, we decided to have supper at your hotel on prior booking.

I was
highly
disappointed with the meals.
Let
me
explain
, ambience at the restaurant was fine
yet
the meals
were served
in an uncleaned plate. This action has
been reported
to server on spot!
In addition
, the dishes we ordered had a pungent smell which was unbearable. It looked like sea food were not cleaned
properly
.

I wanted to bring the above problems to your notice
so
that you can co-ordinate with the other staff. I request you to work on the food cleanliness which is key factor to restaurant. Would you
please
let
the customers know about the availability of dishes on prior while booking?

Thanking you,

Yours
Sincerely
,

Nancy
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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